Feltöltve: 2005-03-09 13:47:47
Megtekintve: 8100
a moment
You crawl among whispering moss
frost licks your spines
sweet bark's scent swings you
you wave like river under the ice;
My body sneaks near
shrieks a soundless call
and dies into you like summer-leaves
which were killed by the fall.
frost licks your spines
sweet bark's scent swings you
you wave like river under the ice;
My body sneaks near
shrieks a soundless call
and dies into you like summer-leaves
which were killed by the fall.
Hozzászóláshoz jelentkezz be vagy regisztrálj!
2005-03-11 17:38:41
by wave I mean hullámzik, moves like the waves of the water, when its surface is covered with winter-ice...ya know :)
2005-03-09 16:09:28
The second part of the poem is extremly beautifull.But there is a missunderstanding line in the first part: you wave like river under the ice"
I can't imagine it. (But anyway it's can be a fault of mine.)
Good poem, I like it. Thanks for the feeling.